Violence for retribution strikes a delicate balance between what is just and what is right. There are often many angles presented during war, many of which cannot be truly understood unless one is placed in the time and setting. Thus each culture draws different conclusions to the morality of war. The Edwardian period was the first phase of the hundred-year war. As depicted in the “Lagoon” and Heart of Darkness, both depict the use of violence as amoral rather than immoral. To illustrate Kurtz in Heart of darkness comes to a realization that his horrendous actions are inhumane and he will die with his sins. This Edwardian period although heavily infused with war, also showed some economic and social changes. This era illustrated a change into socialism, which depicted equality to the lower class citizens during the time, in turn leaving people questioning the status of war. Today, we have seen the result of violence as retribution with the retaliation of 9/11 attacks. The terrorist attacks left America, shock and terrified; two qualities that disable our ability to think properly. As America rushed into two wars (Afghanistan and Iraq) both of which we lost. Violence of retribution has killed many American soldiers as well as many innocent Iraqis and Afghanistanis.
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I thought that this synthesis question was very well written. I found the reference to Heart of Darkness very specific and insightful. I also thought there were a few facts that could have used a bit more elaboration. For example, "Period was the first phase of the hundred year war." You should have maybe explained how that war ended and how violence affected the war. There were some losses and some victories on both the American and Iraqi side of the war. Some believe we lost some believe we won. I would tread carefully with your words in this section of your response because any person who believes that we won will discredit the rest of your work. Other then those two critiques this is an amazing paragraph with a lot of great information and insight.
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